Roxanne~ Jane~ Ryan

[mozz]

Roxanne Jane Ryan

There's always something different going wrong
The path I walk's in the wrong direction
There's always someone hanging on
Can anybody help me make things better?
Your tears don't fall
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FULL NAME

Roxanne Jane Ryan

NICKNAMES

Roxy, Rj and panda.

GENDER

female

AGE

eight-teen years of age

BIRTHDAY

19th of September

SEXUAL ORIENTATION

Bisexual (more into guys though)

POSITION

Damaged Soul, apprentice mechanic, exercise rider

HAIR COLOR

black

EYE COLOR

blue

BUILD

slender and thin .

HEIGHT

five feet - six inches

IDENTIFYING FEATURES

she has her ears pierced along with star tattoos that run from the middle of her ribs to just above her hip bone

FACE CLAIM

megan fox

OVERALL

Roxy is quite stunning even though she doesn’t believe this at all. Her body is thin but slightly curvy. The curves fill out in all the right places even though she hates it. She has naturally tanned brown skin with gorgeous jet black slightly wavy hair and two beautiful oceanic blue eyes that shine like diamonds when shes happy. She is quite short standing at only five-six. She has long stunning legs that she always shows off with in shorts she belives that her legs are the best part about her body.
She always looks happy wearing some bright colours mixed with blacks and dark purples. Shes usually got some grease on her petite hands and sometimes a little on her face but she doesn’t notice half the time. She loves engines especially cars and trucks and even motorcycles. She looks sweet innocent and shy but she has a lot of muscle beneath her. She hangs with the tough of the tough and wont back down. She is usually smiling until she gets angry then the neutral expression takes its place till one minute ure on your ass and shes hovering over you with a death glare. cute but deadly

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LIKES

• Motorcycles
• Bar fights
• Animals
• Ice cream
• Funny people
• Playng sport
• Riding horses
• Cars
• Metal/rock/screamo music.

DISLIKES

• arrogant people
• bitchy girls
• animal cruelty
• people who think their better than her
• anything with honey in it
• rap music

STRENGTHS

• shes very determined which helps her succed in life for the things she sets out to do
• shes a very talented novelist but she only writes when her lifes in a bad place
• shes very kind and caring but doesn’t trust too easily she will help those she believes will not return back into abusers or anything like that

WEAKNESSES

• she can be very judgemental
• she is a praise lover she does the things she does for praise she cant help it, it was the way she was raised so she believes that if she is praised for something then it was the right thing to do even if she didn’t want to do it
• shes very stubborn and hates any type of authority she will lash out both with her toungge and her fists which winds her up in a lot of trouble most of the time

QUIRKS AND HABITS

she picks at her cuticles when nervous and will fidget also when nervous

SECRETS

she is afraid of becoming like her father

PERSONALITY

Roxy has the aura of a playful, flirty, cheeky girl but once you meet her it’s a whole other story. Shes very quiet and reserved except when shes angry. Shes also very stubborn and not afraid to throw punches. Shes your typical tough girl but she has a heart of gold and would never dream of killing anyone. Shes very intelligent and quick witted never skipping a beat. Music is her whole life and soul. She has a soft spot for animals and gets very jealous easily.
She loves confrontation, a true fighter and lover at heart. She battles with her emotions all the time but never shows it. Her eyes look either glazed over or interested all the time. Her smile can sometimes look fake but most of the time its genuine. Shes a happy go lucky girl.

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PARENTS

James Ryan, thirty-five years of age (in jail)
Amanda Ryan *deceased*

SIBLINGS

Jake Ryan, sixteen years of age

PETS

Acara, female dog, kelpie x, 9 weeks old
Blood on the dance floor, quarter horse x paint stallion, 4 years of age
Exorcist, thoroughbred stallion, 3 years
Star gazer, paint mare, 2 years of age
Lunapelt, mix bred cat, 2 months

SIGNIFICANT OTHERS

none

HISTORY

Roxy was born to James and Amanda ryan she wasn’t a planned child so her mother blamed her saying she destroyed her youth. Her dad loved her though and was always there helping her. She was only two when her father began to groom her to take over the family scam. He took her on trips with him to visit and jack cars. By the age of ten she could hotwire a fully alarmed car without being caught. She was and still is an attention seeker since she was depraved when she was younger. Everytime her father told her she did well and that he was proud of her she shoved any feelings of sadness and doubt aside bracing the contact and praise. Soon her and her younger brother Jake were very good car jackers. Jake always tried to measure up to his sister but he couldn’t do it. Roxy was taught the tricks of the trade how to hotwire cars, turn back mileage on a car, how to rebuild and fix engines everything. Her father claimed he was proud of her and that she was a good girl.


At the age of fourteen roxys father was put in jail for killing a man who claimed his car was fixed properly and demanded a refund claiming he was going to sue james for all he was worth so James killed him with a ratchet. Roxy was devastated when they dragged her father away but she continued to run the scam with her younger brother who was twelve at the time. Until they were both caught and put into juvey. Their mother died while they were in there and roxy told herself she had to stop so once she left juvey at the age of seventeen she took up an apprenticeship at a local garage and got into horses. She works herself to the bone and ouldnt be happier yet she still worries about her bother Jake. Who told her flat out never to contact him and that she betrayed the family. He still runs the scam while shes on the straight and narrow for now at least.

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NAME

Roxy

EXPERIENCE

2 years

REFERRAL

Crossfire farms

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Made by Hazel! Don't use on other sites without permission, 'kay? Thanks!

[Hazel]

Pending!
If you could just re-read and fix your grammar, that would be wonderful. I've noticed lots of times where you should put a period because you're starting a new thought, but you just keep going. For example, this:

"She always looks happy wearing some bright colours mixed with blacks and dark purples shes usually got some grease on her petite hands and sometimes a little on her face but she doesn’t notice half the time"

Should be like this:

"She always looks happy wearing some bright colours mixed with blacks and dark purples. She's usually got some grease on her petite hands and sometimes a little on her face but she doesn’t notice half the time."

Commas, when placed properly, and periods to end sentences are needed in writing - if I was to read this out loud, then I would hardly have anywhere to pause for breath, as that is what you generally do when you reach a comma or period. There was a few run on sentences in there too, from what I can tell, but with minimal periods, it's hard to tell.

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[mozz]

sorry this is my first actual year at school so im still learning

is this better?

[Hazel]

Accepted!
Welcome to Whatever it Takes! Please make sure to post in the name list and the face claims.

Much better - still missing a few commas or apostrophes here and there but a very, very big improvement, so I'll let it slide. Just always try to remember your punctuation while you're posting, and you should be fine

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